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Support for students and school staff through the Safe Return to Class Fund
From: Prime Minister of Canada Justin Trudeau
News Release
January 29, 2021—Ottawa, Ontario
This has been difficult for students, teachers, staff, and families as our country continues to deal with the impacts of the global COVID-19 pandemic. Student’s are being asked to learn in new ways, teachers are adapting their teaching styles, and parents find ways to keep their children engaged with their schoolwork while they may be working from home. With the continued rise in COVID-19 cases across the country. The Government of Canada will continue to be there for them, and to support provinces and territories in their efforts to protect the health of students and staff. Comment by Amlesh Sengar: Starting the Press Release with This is incorrect. Initially one needs to express the situation and then can use pronoun to identify it further Comment by Amlesh Sengar: No need of apostrophe in Student Comment by Amlesh Sengar: The sentence is incomplete. Full Stop should be removed and instead comma should be used
The Prime Minister, Justin Trudeau, today announce the second instalment of the Safe Return to Class Fund, to ensure students, teachers, and staff has the support they need to stay safe and healthy throughout this difficult school year.
The second instalment of up to $1 billion are provided to the provinces and territories, and can be used for various measures, such as supporting adapted learning spaces and remote learning, improving air ventilation, increasing hand sanitation and hygiene, purchasing personal protective equipment and cleaning supplies, and providing health and safety training for staff. Provinces and territories will continue working alongside local school boards and administering the funding, to ensure the safety of students and staff members during the pandemic. Comment by Amlesh Sengar: Use of up to not...