Naomie: You have a wonderful idea here, but you have written this for the wrong audience.
This plan is the script for the video you will do at the end of week 10, to the decision-makers at your company. Your job is to persuade them to develop your plan. Here, you have written a plan almost as an outline of what you would do to create what you send to them.
Here's what I mean:This plan needs to start with something like this:
"Hello, I'm glad that you are here to hear about how we can develop an overall framework for the management and coordination of Information Technology Services in our business.
As we all know there is currently not a standard delivery of messages from the communication manager to share content with the appropriate audiences across our organization.
This also requires video and platform updates across the business as well as editorial standards to ensure everyone is informed in a uniform and coherent manner.
Currently, we are losingXXX amount of revenue due to our current communication system. In order to remedy this, I propose that we do YYYYY in order to upgrade our technology and ZZZZ to train our employees.
Although the initial investment is costly, the Return on Investment will be AAAA, and thenew efficiencies will return an improved company morale, business opportunities, and ease of communication across the company.
That would be your introduction, and then you go into your background, key message, and call to action. The call to action is almost a restatement of your introduction. You are giving a pitch. This is not a traditional paper. ) i had received a C so please this is the final one worth 300 points do it right